People have very strong opinions about outlining vs. “pansting” (or writing “by the seat of your pants”).
My belief is that, wherever you fall on the Outlining Spectrum, you should do what works best for you. Neither one is better or more right than the other, nor is one way going to work for every writer.
I’ve been writing seriously for a decade, maybe longer if you consider some of the workshops I took in college. I was never one to sit down and outline before starting a story.
In college, I participated in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) every November and would get 50,000 words into a project before giving up completely. I almost never planned ahead. I winged it completely.
During my MFA program, which I was in from 2009-2011, I wrote short stories and never plotted them out ahead of time, either. I wrote what I felt inspired to write and fixed it later.
In 2014, I started writing a novel by accident, which meant I did zero planning for that, too.
My tactic was always to just write what felt most urgent. To go where the energy was and write that.
And, you know what? It works. That’s a great way to write a first draft.
I know that now, but I didn’t know it a few years ago.
About a month or two into writing my first novel back in 2014, I decided to create an outline so I’d have a clue about what I was doing. Up to that point, I was just writing what felt the most important to write.
None of my scenes were really connected. I wasn’t sure what I was trying to say. I was just really enjoying the process of writing.
I can still remember sitting in Starbucks with my computer as I pulled up a blank document to start building an outline. The feeling in my body as I did this was tension and dread. I worked on it for a little while and then scrapped it completely.
It was way too early for me to try and organize the story because I didn’t yet know what the story was.
At that point, an outline was useless to me.
Before my second draft, however, I took a sort of “aerial” look at my story, read The Plot Whisperer by Martha Alderson, and started organizing the scenes I’d written plus the new ones I wanted to write.
If you think back to any time you had to write a paper or organize a big project or event, how did your brain first approach the task?
Did you grab a piece of paper and make a detailed list so you wouldn’t forget anything?
Did you just dive in and figure it out along the way?
Something in the middle?
You probably already know if your brain craves structure or freedom when it comes to planning. Don’t force yourself into a method that just doesn’t work for you no matter what other people suggest.
It took me years to realize this, but you don’t have to be one way or the other. You don’t have to JUST be the kind of person who outlines everything or outlines nothing.
You can do what I do.
You can think in terms of a narrative arc and plot points (seriously, The Plot Whisperer is my bible. You should read it!) and build a loose sketch of your story based on the energetic markers you need to hit at certain points in your story.
I bristle at the thought of a strict, unyielding outline. It sucks all the excitement and magic out of my writing process.
But I also know from experience that wandering in the wilderness of a story without a map is a recipe for disaster.
So what I do know is plan the four major plot points I know I need to hit (end of the beginning, the middle, the crisis, and the climax) and build the rest of my scenes around that.
This gives me direction while ensuring that I’m still discovering the story as I’m writing. It keeps the process fresh while also staving off overwhelm.
It lets me think, “I know these scenes are building to that specific moment, so what’s the best way to get there?”
I guess it’s kind of like going on a road trip and knowing you need to hit a certain destination by nightfall, and being ok with stopping wherever you want along the way.
Learn about different styles of outlining and “pansting” and then customize the process until your writing process is easier.
That’s really the whole point.
Don’t outline if it just makes writing harder. Don’t wing it if that leaves you feeling too overwhelmed to create.
The system that you land on should help reduce resistance as much as possible. If you’re like me, maybe you need to see the destination off in the distance, but have plenty of room to explore on your way there.
That helps me sit down and write without feeling like I’m following orders or writing aimlessly.
But maybe you like having strict orders! Maybe that helps you sit down and write. Maybe you’re the most productive if you can just do whatever you want and clean up the scenes later.
This is one of those times when I’ll remind you to trust yourself.
I can’t tell you whether you should outline your book or not before you start writing, but you can absolutely figure it out with a little trial and error.
The scenes came naturally, the characters felt wonderfully formed on the page, and I hardly ever felt stuck when I sat down to write.
And then, wouldn’t you know it, I did get stuck.
I hit the halfway point, which sometimes is described as the portion of a manuscript where the story sags. The middle can be a tricky point when writing a long-term project. It’s not unusual for the middle of a project to be the murkiest part.
When I got to the middle, around 48,000 words, I knew I had to make some plot decisions that would set the trajectory for the second half of the novel.
That felt like a larger task than laying the groundwork in the first half, and instead of figuring that stuff out, I got happily distracted by other projects: teaching a creative writing course for a few months, revising a short story, making jewelry and knitting hats.
The excitement of starting a new piece had faded when I was faced with the reality that I’d have to figure out what comes next in my book. I really didn’t know what should come next.
I want you to know that you don’t have to stay stuck.
You can finish your work-in-progress even if you haven’t actively written for it a while.
I sat down recently and read all 170 pages of my manuscript and made notes on each section within each chapter. Instead of continuing to feel stuck, this exercise reignited my excitement and gave me some ideas I hadn’t considered before.
I’ve been writing at least a few hundred to over a thousand words a day since then, and it’s safe to say I’ve got my groove back with my manuscript. And I’m set to finish it within the next couple of months.
I’m not saying this to brag, but to remind you that it’s ok to pause or get stuck. There’s always a way back into your piece.
Read everything you’ve already written
I recommend doing this if you’ve spent any time away from your manuscript and feel like you might not remember all the key parts of the story.
It’s not easy to hold the landscape of an entire novel or memoir in your mind, so don’t feel bad if you need a refresher on what you wrote. Take some notes as you read so you can easily reference what happens in each scene and chapter, then make notes of any ideas that come up as you read.
Put yourself on a schedule
This is unsexy advice, but if you’re eager to finish your work-in-progress yet keep putting it off, give yourself a deadline and make a writing schedule and stick to it.
Writing coaching with me can make this even easier since you’re accountable to someone while also receiving support and encouragement.
But even if you aren’t working with a coach or accountability partner, you can still motivate yourself by choosing a date and putting it on your calendar as your first draft deadline.
Then, break down how much you’ll need to write up until that deadline and figure out how to make it happen.
Can you write a few hundred words every morning or evening? Are you able to have some marathon writing sessions on weekends? Think about what works for your life and schedule.
Maybe you need to hire a babysitter a couple afternoons a week or wake up an hour early or skip some weekend events to fit in your writing time. Do what you have to do to stick with your deadline.
Trust me. Having a plan makes it that much easier to finish what you started.
Swap manuscripts with another writer
I love writing groups and writing partners for so many reasons, but especially because they can be eager and supportive readers of your work.
My writing group will often read my new pieces before anyone else, and their feedback is usually what shapes my revision process.
Plus, once I’ve told them about something I’m working on, I suddenly become accountable because they’re invested and curious and excited. A good writing group or writing partner is truly the best.
Make a plan to exchange projects with another writer who is also finishing their manuscript.
It’s probably most helpful if this deadline is a month or two out (or even more) from when you plan to finish your manuscript.
This will give you time to do some revision so you’re not sending someone your unpolished first draft. Unless that’s what you and your writing partner want to exchange, in which case, get it!
Remind yourself that you can change ANYTHING in revision
Sometimes we lose steam because a project genuinely isn’t working.
Other times, it’s simply because resistance makes us feel we have to get it right the first time around, so the second we feel like we’re doing it “wrong,” we want to bail.
That’s silly.
This gives you such freedom as you finish your project! Think about it: you can make the writing stronger later. You can fix plot holes, flesh out characters, make scenes deeper later.
You don’t have to get it right or perfect on the first pass. You just have to finish.
In fact, you can’t really make the story better until you finish it, so don’t get hung up on perfection.
Use your first draft as a time to play, experiment, and take risks. If you decide later that you want to cut or change anything you’ve written, you can. There’s nothing you cannot fix or change when you revise.
And finally, figure out what’s holding you back so you can overcome it
This might seem like woo-woo advice, but I firmly believe a self-aware writer is a happy writer. Instead of feeling stuck and miserable and not understanding why, try to figure out the root cause.
Is there something, in particular, keeping you from finishing your work-in-progress?
Are you overcome with self-doubt? Did you get distracted by a shinier, newer project?
Are you afraid to finish it because then it might actually become something great? And you might have to actually admit that you’re a good writer who knows what they’re doing?
Think about it and be honest with yourself. If you want to finish your manuscript but can’t seem to get there, investigate why.
You deserve to understand what’s going on in your head so you can write despite how you may feel.
You deserve to finish your book!
It was late in the evening, mid-winter, and I was sitting on the couch next to my husband, Matt. I read the email draft about a dozen times and then asked Matt to hold my hand while I hit send.
And then I did a little celebratory dance!
I’d sent my first query. It was to an agent I’d met in person a couple years earlier who had requested I send my novel to her when it was done.
Although she didn’t think the project was a good fit for her list, I kept sending queries. I kept revising my query letter, I kept reworking my opening chapters.
And finally, after about seven or eight months and the same number of rejections, I decided to stop for a while.
I’d started a new novel in the middle of all that querying (honestly, it was because Lauren Groff told me to… but more on that in another blog post) and felt a little bummed that nobody wanted to see the novel I’d just spend four years working on.
Now, a year later, the sting of rejection has faded and I have some thoughts to share about the process.
Here are some of my top tips for novelists who are about to start querying a novel.
Here’s the weird, delicate line you have to walk as a hopeful novelist: you should work on your book until it’s as good as you can get it, but don’t sit on it so long you never send it into the world.
You shouldn’t query a manuscript you haven’t revised multiple times. There’s just no way it’ll be ready for an agent after one or maybe even two drafts. Respect your story enough to take your time writing and revising it, having beta readers give you feedback, and proofreading it carefully.
You might even want to work with a developmental editor to make sure the story works. Do what you have to do to make your story shine.
BUT.
Don’t spend your entire life tinkering with it in an attempt at perfection. It’ll never be perfect. And there will always be something you can change in your book. I’m sure that’s true even after books are published.
All you can do is make the manuscript as good as you can possibly make it at this point in time.
Maybe in five years, you’d write it differently, but do you want to sit with it for another five years and rewrite it? Or do you want to make it great right now and try to get it published?
Before you query agents, you should do as much research as humanly possible on the following:
I spent months writing and rewriting my query letter, and even more time researching and making a list of the agents I wanted to query. It might be time-consuming, but it’s worth every minute!
I don’t know what I’d do without my writing group and my writing friends who generously agree to read my work, give me feedback, workshop my pieces, and generally support my writing.
You absolutely must have at least one trusted writer in your life who is supportive, honest, and empathetic.
This, to me, is non-negotiable. If you don’t have this person in your life yet, or you want more, reach out and let me know. I offer a writing coaching service that doubles as this exact thing!
Support is important because writing is solitary, rejection is tough, and sometimes the best way to keep going is knowing there’s someone in your corner.
And it’s just nice to talk to another writer sometimes! We get so caught up in our own minds and our own projects that we forget so many other writers deal with the same feelings.
We might write alone, but that doesn’t mean writing has to be lonely.
Writing is best when shared with other people who love it, too.
Once you’ve polished your novel and your query letter and started sending them to agents, do yourself a favor and START SOMETHING NEW.
If you haven’t already, that is.
I literally had to hear this advice from Lauren Groff’s mouth at a book signing before I realized it’s what I needed to do. It was beyond helpful.
Starting a new novel meant I could focus on something besides the pending queries I’d sent out.
It also meant the rejections hurt a little less since I was working on a project that would likely be the next thing I’d query down the road. If the first book didn’t work out, I had another one in progress.
Always have something else simmering. Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. Insert other cliches. You get what I mean, though!
I would love to talk to you about how to start new projects, how to maintain existing projects, and how to stay consistent with your writing even when it feels like there’s no time. Click here to learn more!
At the end of 2018, I saw a few Instagram stories from writers who were recounting all of their major accomplishments for the year.
Everything from publishing books to landing on bestseller lists for multiple weeks to writing drafts of one or more other novels.
It was actually really stunning to see how much some people write and publish in a single year. I know everyone is different, but it lit a fire in me to see if I can get more done this year, too.
And if you feel like interruptions to your life or your routine or just your mental state might throw you off course, I have some ideas for how you can maintain your writing life no matter what might come up.
What’s your core reason for writing? Why do you want to do it regularly?
For me, it’s because my identity is connected to writing.
I’ve been fascinated with stories and storytelling and words since I was a kid (like a lot of writers!), so my need to write is a deep-rooted one that started a long time ago.
When I don’t write often enough, I feel generally irritated, restless, annoyed. It’s almost like writing releases pent-up creative energy that needs an outlet or else it makes a mess in my brain.
Basically, writing is vital to my overall sense of happiness.
Once you understand your most basic reasons for writing, you have something concrete you can come back to when life distractions pop up.
This is especially important if writing is more than just a hobby. For some people, it’s a necessity.
Writing routines are great.
They’re like safe little houses you can duck inside when you want to write. The layout and decor never change. You always know what to expect when you walk inside. And they’re always there, unlocked, ready for you.
Routines can be simple and still be powerful.
My favorite routines are tied to a sense: hearing certain music, smelling certain tea, eating a certain snack.
But they can also be tied to time, place, writing utensil, a physical act, prayer, meditation, yoga. Whatever works for you.
I recommend having some kind of routine, however small, because it makes it easier to keep writing or return to your writing if life interrupts you for a while.
If you have to take a break from your writing, it can be infinitely easier to start up again with an already-established routine that triggers your brain to write.
Routines can also make it easier to stay in your writing practice when life gets chaotic. They can even make writing feel like a refuge. The world might be swirling around you, but your unique writing routine gives you something real and familiar to lean on.
These are two things I’m going to be doing more in 2018!
Be wise enough to recognize when you need help and ASK for it.
That might mean help with accountability, help with childcare, help with getting up early to write before work, help with life chores that make it hard to write as often as you want.
You don’t have to do it all. Let other people shoulder some of your load so you have more bandwidth and time to write.
And trust yourself! Please, please, please.
Trust the way you feel, trust what you want to write about, trust that you’ll figure out the best way to make time for writing in your life.
Trust that if your writing is interrupted momentarily (hello distractions of daily life!) or for a longer period of time, you’ll always make your way back to the page. It’s always there, and your writing is always with you no matter what’s happening in life or the world around you.
As if it’s that simple! As if each person, each day, each life is exactly the same. Sure, a day does contain 24 hours, but that doesn’t mean each minute will be used the same way for everyone.
Not even close.
So when someone decides they want to write more (or simply begin writing), hearing the old adage that “Oprah has the same number of hours in a day as you!” really doesn’t help if you feel like you have no time to write as it is.
In fact, it usually just makes people feel terrible about their productivity, their time management, and themselves. And that doesn’t lead to a happy writer.
This is something anyone can do regardless of their schedule. Here are some of my top tips for finding time to write when you have no free time.
I used to have trouble writing if I didn’t have the right conditions: a full two or three hours to myself, the motivation to write, something exciting to write about, a good mug of coffee within reach, etc.
It was such a lousy way to exist as a writer because I always felt like I wanted to write, but I had this huge mental block telling me I wouldn’t be productive if I “only” had a few minutes.
So instead of doing what I could with the time I had, I would watch those opportunities float away and wait for the conditions to be perfect before I wrote a thing.
Eventually, I trained myself out of that bad habit. The main thing I had to do was actively rethink my writing sessions.
Instead of always needing a large block of time, I learned I could actually write quite a bit in five or ten minutes.
Having a baby also helped me further reframe my writing time. During the newborn days, I’d write while the baby napped (usually right on my chest). Since I never knew when exactly he’d wake up, I would get right to work when he dozed off, which meant less time spent agonizing over starting.
Think about your writing as a constantly flowing stream you can access whenever you want.
You don’t have to set aside special blocks of time for it (although you can!) and you’re allowed to dip in and out of it as often as you want in a single day.
Carry around a notebook or use your phone to write when those small scraps of time pop up. Even if that means you write for ten minutes while you’re in the drive-through pharmacy line or while you’re on your lunch break, it still counts.
And, it adds up.
I struggle with feeling like I’m wasting time if I’m not being “productive” (i.e. actively working on something that will get me closer to my goals) every moment I’m not parenting my kid.
But the truth is this: as writers, there’s no such thing as wasted time.
If you’re a writer, your inherent job is observing the world. If you’re sitting quietly and simply taking in your surroundings, you’re not wasting time.
If you’re busy with your kids or your job or your endless to-do list, you’re not wasting time.
All of it is fodder for your writing. Every second of your life has the potential to shift something in your writing if you’re observing it closely enough.
None of that is wasted time. Every moment you spend in curious observation of the world around you just enriches your writing that much more.
And if you’re like me and sometimes battle the feeling that rest is wasteful, take a deep breath and tell yourself a burnt-out writer is less productive than a well-rested writer.
This might seem obvious to some people, but it really wasn’t that obvious to me right away.
In order to fit something additional into an already very full life, you usually have to consider removing something else from the equation.
Unless you’re willing to sacrifice sleep, you may have to scan the landscape of your day to see where you can cut something.
If you have absolutely zero time to fit in even a ten-minute writing session, think about what other ten-minute-long acts you have in your day that could go.
“Stop scrolling social media” is always a favorite tip in articles about finding more time, but maybe it’s just a matter of giving up ten minutes of scrolling in place of writing.
Can someone else in your life take over one or two of your responsibilities so you free up the mental space and actual time for writing?
Can you wake up ten minutes early? Write while you’re eating lunch? Skip the coffee run and write at home while you’re brewing it in your kitchen?
These are small suggestions to get you started since only you know which things in your life are non-negotiable and which are more flexible.
I’ve helped other writers get started on their dream projects, finish projects that were slowing down, find time to write each day when they thought they couldn’t, and even figure out how to keep writing while caring for a sick family member.
I would love to help you write more, too. Sometimes the best way to get started is to have someone supportive in your corner helping you be consistent and focused. That’s exactly what you’ll get if you work with me, plus some.
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